Sunday, February 6, 2011

Goddess of Desire



This poem is for the Writer's Island Prompt-Beguile

Beguile me with your eyes
gaze deeply within and
contemplate my soul
probe my inner depths and
behold me raw and exposed.

Seduce me with your charm
adorn me with your flattery
lure me into your heart
compose your words into
a sonnet worthy of this
epic love.

Bewitch me with your touch
ignite searing flames of carnality
upon my frenzied flesh
let your fingers linger
in my favorite places as

our bodies converge
feverishly fondling
shuddering in the rapture of
passions sublime.

I am ambrosia

the sweetest treat
a delicious delicacy
teasing and taunting
your tastebuds
leaving you longing for more
always more.

Fulfill my every desire and I
will unlease my ecstacy upon you
lavishing transcendent satisfaction
rapture beyond compare
as you weep in unabashed awe
beholding me in all my glory and
aching for my devotion.

'Goddes of Desire' Copyright Patricia Schoenberger 2/5/11, all rights reserved worldwide.

10 comments:

  1. A very confident seductress speaking. Are you Aphrodite?

    Nice read.
    :)
    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  2. deep words.
    vivid and lovely word flow.

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  3. Welcome Join Jingle Poetry Potluck week 21,
    Feel free to share 1 to 3 old poems or random poems, cheers.

    Love your talent demonstrated here,
    Hope to see you share.
    xxx

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  4. livintheblues~ Thanks, that's just the reaction I was hoping for. :)

    Blasphemous Aesthete~ Yes, Aphordite is the Goddess I had in mind when I wrote this.

    Jingle Poetry~ Thank you. I've stopped by your site a few times but haven't linked anything yet. But I will soon.

    Have a great evening!

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  5. I think I need a drink of cold water.

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  6. evenstarwen~ lol, that's just the reaction I was hoping for!

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  7. I am ambrosia

    the sweetest treat
    a delicious delicacy
    teasing and taunting
    your tastebuds
    leaving you longing for more
    always more.

    exactly how a desire appears, so tempting and vivid!

    Liked this one a lot Jane!

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