Saturday, February 12, 2011

Subliminal Fantasy

Since I haven't written anything new lately, I'm posting another repeat. This poem just kinda fell outta my head one day. 

Aberrant colors pierce my mind,
blinding me with brilliance,
sharp and savage, like razors of ice.
Pleasure and pain, two sides
of the same coin, 
one intensifying the other
until they cannot be distinguished.

Lights pulsating to the beat of
music thundering through my head,
a symphony of my own twisted creation,
a perplexing cacophony of radiance and
sound, it resonates deep within,
piercing into the depths of my soul.

A subliminal hallucination
erupting before my eyes, I'm
losing control, losing my grip
everything is spinning wildly,
careening madly out of time and space
a crescendo of color and sound
exploding in my mind.

'Subliminal Fantasy' Copyright Patricia Schoenberger 2008, all rights reserved worldwide.

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