Thursday, March 10, 2011

Seductive Beauty


This very short piece was inspired by Three Word Wednesday, the words being:

dainty, haunting, tantalize

I was totally enchanted by these words and within 5 minutes this poem was born. I like them so much I might also write a different, longer poem using them.


Haunting beauty
mesmerizes, tantalizes
lures me into a web of seduction
from which I may never escape and
gratefully will I indulge in
her dainty, delectable delights
until the day I draw my final breath.

'Seductive Beauty' Copyright Patricia Schoenberger 3/10/11, all rights reserved worldwide.

8 comments:

  1. The words are just like the pic. :) Promising and beautiful.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  2. love the versatility of this post... love is a strong potion that lasts long... it is good to come back to visit... i have enjoyed over the past few years observing your writing as you pass thru time...

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  3. great) liked everything very much) keep it up and dont stop)

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  4. Hello my friend! I want to say that this article is awesome, nice written and include almost all vital info. I would like to see more posts like this.

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